Jezebel Tale A Succubus Story Book 1 edition by D R Rosier Romance eBooks
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Jezebel is a young half succubus. Going to college, working a job, living a normal life.
Or at least, as normal as possible for a being that must feed on the lust of others to live.
For the most part she ignores the Angels and Demons, choosing to go her own way. Make her own life.
All that is about to change, she has a destiny and events surrounding her life will not leave her to the simple peace she desires.
WARNING This book contains explicit sex! Heterosexual, lesbian and multiple partners. If you will be offended do not buy this book!
Jezebel Tale A Succubus Story Book 1 edition by D R Rosier Romance eBooks
First the pro's.. the story is pretty creative and sexy. I enjoyed it quite a bit.But the con's... the author doesn't know some basics of writing. He has trouble with tenses and even within the same paragraph constantly fluctuates between past tense, present, and a confusing jumble of both.
There isn't a clear viewpoint. It's told as: Jazebel does this, Sandy does that.
On the plus side he seems to get a little better as the story goes on and perhaps will grow into a decent writer.
But he needs to take some courses in the basics of writing, or perhaps just practice.
So in short, if you can look beyond grammer and writing and just focus on the story then this is very enjoyable, and very sexy.
If you're a "grammer nazi" then avoid this.
Oh... he's also got a backdoor fetish and virtually every encounter is focused in this area. Doesn't detract from anything for me but you should be aware.
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Jezebel Tale A Succubus Story Book 1 edition by D R Rosier Romance eBooks Reviews
I liked it because it is a very Good interesting story that will keep you reading all the way to the end
The start cost this book a star but over all I loved it. The only real problem was the point of view in 3rd person that doesn't really stay there. It jumps around on that point of view several times and would be so better if it was fixed.
The second half of the book I didn't see this problem at all and the story really picked up at that point too. I truly enjoy the plot line of this story and despite its issues it's very worth reading. I just hope the first part of this story gets fixed...
This seems to be the author's first published work, at least under this pen name, and it shows. The story itself is good, but the writing style is strange. It is almost like he was writing a play or a movie script, rather than a book. However, if you can get past that it is a good, fun read and I enjoyed it. And I can also say that the writing improves considerably in the following books and I enjoyed the full series.
Pretty much entirely sex, there is just barely a plot. But that is OK, and not the reason for this rating.
Author, for the love of God, write in the first person, or in the third person. Not both! And not switching back and forth between the two, often within the same paragraph! It is incredibly distracting, and really ruins your work.
"Jezabel walked into the club. My father looked up at me and glared. She got irritated."
No, no, no.
"Jezabel walked into the club. Her father looked up at her and glared. She got irritated."
OR
"I walked into the club. My father looked up at me and glared. I got irritated."
One or the other! You cannot split the difference and try to do both.
And you do it almost every page!
First the pro's.. the story is pretty creative and sexy. I enjoyed it quite a bit.
But the con's... the author doesn't know some basics of writing. He has trouble with tenses and even within the same paragraph constantly fluctuates between past tense, present, and a confusing jumble of both.
There isn't a clear viewpoint. It's told as Jazebel does this, Sandy does that.
On the plus side he seems to get a little better as the story goes on and perhaps will grow into a decent writer.
But he needs to take some courses in the basics of writing, or perhaps just practice.
So in short, if you can look beyond grammer and writing and just focus on the story then this is very enjoyable, and very sexy.
If you're a "grammer nazi" then avoid this.
Oh... he's also got a backdoor fetish and virtually every encounter is focused in this area. Doesn't detract from anything for me but you should be aware.
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